17 March 2012

Our Wonderful Weekly Writer



The children were given the challenge of retelling one of our favourite stories.

Giraffes Can't Dance

Gerald couldn't dance.  He was terrible at dancing.  He stepped onto the dance floor, but the lions saw him coming and the lions started to roar.  Gerald walked away.  He met a cricket.  He listened to the cricket play a tune.  He did the most amazing dance.  "Yay!"  said Gerald.  He was the most exciting dancer in the world.
By Jasmine.

2 comments:

  1. I like your writing Jasmine. It is beautiful.

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  2. Your writing is beautiful Jasmine.

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